Preneurs Helping Preneurs Get Noticed



Don Sturgill


Kristin … good job.

A couple of observations:

In the table of contents, everything is on one line … but for one line. You have it like this: TIP #5: Keep Watching: Opportunities Come When You Least Expect Them.

Visual appeal would be enhanced if you’d keep that to one line, like the rest. This might do it: TIP #5: Keep Watching: Opportunities Come When Least Expected

One more thing: All red in the body seems too much for me. I’d try keeping the red in the headlines, but using black text in the body.

Wishing you great success!

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