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I am planning to offer a 5-day newsletter challenge as a lead magnet and I would like feedback before I do. If you would be willing to help me, here is the link to the optin page: http://authoritymarketingmastery.com/5day-newsletter-challenge. You should receive a challenge blueprint, 5 days of emails for the challenge, and then an offer email. I would appreciate any feedback you are willing to share.
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I’ve signed up, Jan.
Also Favorited this thread so that I can find it later. 🙂
Bruce Hoag PhD
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Bruce, thank you! I’m looking forward to your feedback.
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I intend to read through all five together. Then when I’ve thought about it a bit, I’ll give you some feedback.
Would you prefer to receive it by PM?
Bruce Hoag PhD
The Internet Marketing Psychologist
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Hi Jan,
I will try my best to take a look and get back to you. But I would advise you keep this thread open as long as you can, to allow maximum participation.
It might be worth private messaging individuals so you get a clearer picture faster. Maybe every member who has contributed within the last 7 days might be a starting point.
Favouriting the thread is a great comment from Bruce and I started doing that myself only about a week ago. So if and when you contact others ask them to do the same.
I am going to sign up now before I retire to my bed:)
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Thank you for your thoughtful feedback. And I’ll see you in the Facebook group!
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Hi Jan,
I liked the YouTube video concise, and to the point, also well presented in a clear resonant voice.
You have a new YouTube channel subscriber:)
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Malik, thank you! I’m off to find “completed” and get it corrected.
Found it! You have no idea how many times I looked at it and just missed it.
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I signed up! I’ll give you my feedback as it progresses.
The first emails look good. I like how you outline what to expect each day of the challenge. You’ve already got the reader hooked for at least the next 5 days!
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Jennifer, thanks for participating!
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I see that you followed Sean’s advice with the free download. You gave away something valuable and informative. And if I followed just the download and nothing else, I am sure I could create a good newsletter.
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Malik, thank you for the feedback. Do you think it is
a) clear enough and
b) too much information?I’m having a hard time balancing the desire to over-deliver info with not overwhelming with too much information so the participant never gets to actual results.
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That is me up and down. I guess I want them to be able to do a phd level dissertation after the free offer…
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Everything was clearly explained. Your YouTube video explained mail chimp well.
Another way that you can get easy content is to set up Google alerts. That’s fresh content delivery to your inbox.
Your 5th email did not have a clickable link or web address to join your CASH system.
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Malik, thank you for being such a good troubleshooter. I thought I had checked that twice! I’m off to find the problem.
I see what you were referencing. I actually didn’t include the link because the next email you will receive has a link to it as “your next step.” But I will add the link because if you thought there should be one, others probably will think so too. Thank you for making time to help me with this feedback!
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Malik, thanks for the reminder! I just finished setting up the CASH In member site, so I’ll go back and add the link.
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I am in!
Film at 11.
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Scott, I’ll be watching for that YouTube link! Thanks for joining in, and I’ll be watching for your feedback.
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I just signed up. Looking forward to reading your emails!
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Norma, thank you for helping me. I’m looking forward to your comments!
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For anyone who is helping with this challenge: If you are interested in the C.A.S.H. In With Newsletters course, don’t buy through the link. Send me a private message and I’ll send you the link as my “thank you ” for helping me!
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Hi there,
I just signed up.
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Julie, thanks for taking the challenge. Let me know what you think!
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I just signed up Jan. I’ll be watching, waiting and letting you know as the 5 days unfold anything I think could be improved.
First off… seems like another sentence or two on your Thank You page after opting in might be helpful. Instead of just saying ‘Thanks’ maybe you could say to watch your inbox or give other instruction as to what they’ll get and when.
I’ll comment more as time goes on.
Thanks.
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Steve, thank for the feedback! I’ll take another look at it.
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I'll help
I registered.
Did you want feedback on the landing page copy?
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Don
which landing page copy?
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Jan's landing page
http://authoritymarketingmastery.com/5day-newsletter-challenge
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