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  • #4980

    Jan Sandhouse Hurst
    Participant

    I am planning to offer a 5-day newsletter challenge as a lead magnet and I would like feedback before I do. If you would be willing to help me, here is the link to the optin page: http://authoritymarketingmastery.com/5day-newsletter-challenge. You should receive a challenge blueprint, 5 days of emails for the challenge, and then an offer email. I would appreciate any feedback you are willing to share.

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  • #4981

    Bruce Hoag
    Participant

    I’ve signed up, Jan.

    Also Favorited this thread so that I can find it later. 🙂

    Bruce Hoag PhD
    The Internet Marketing Psychologist
    The Mindful Writer - for deep and persuasive copy

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  • #4986

    Leslie Leftley
    Participant

    Hi Jan,

    I will try my best to take a look and get back to you. But I would advise you keep this thread open as long as you can, to allow maximum participation.

    It might be worth private messaging individuals so you get a clearer picture faster. Maybe every member who has contributed within the last 7 days might be a starting point.

    Favouriting the thread is a great comment from Bruce and I started doing that myself only about a week ago. So if and when you contact others ask them to do the same.

    I am going to sign up now before I retire to my bed:)

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    • #5012

      Jan Sandhouse Hurst
      Participant

      Thank you for your thoughtful feedback. And I’ll see you in the Facebook group!

    • #5033

      Leslie Leftley
      Participant

      Hi Jan,

      I liked the YouTube video concise, and to the point, also well presented in a clear resonant voice.

      You have a new YouTube channel subscriber:)

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  • #4988

    Malik Ahmad
    Participant

    I like the look and feel of your squeeze page.

    You have misspelled completed.

    I signed up and I will give you feedback.

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    • #5010

      Jan Sandhouse Hurst
      Participant

      Malik, thank you! I’m off to find “completed” and get it corrected.

      Found it! You have no idea how many times I looked at it and just missed it.

  • #4989

    I signed up! I’ll give you my feedback as it progresses.

    The first emails look good. I like how you outline what to expect each day of the challenge. You’ve already got the reader hooked for at least the next 5 days!

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  • #5021

    Malik Ahmad
    Participant

    I see that you followed Sean’s advice with the free download. You gave away something valuable and informative. And if I followed just the download and nothing else, I am sure I could create a good newsletter.

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    • #5023

      Jan Sandhouse Hurst
      Participant

      Malik, thank you for the feedback. Do you think it is
      a) clear enough and
      b) too much information?

      I’m having a hard time balancing the desire to over-deliver info with not overwhelming with too much information so the participant never gets to actual results.

    • #5026

      Scott Hogue
      Participant

      That is me up and down. I guess I want them to be able to do a phd level dissertation after the free offer…

      Scott Hogue CChH
      Follow me in the "Use What You Learn Challenge" as I create a website using what I learn from Sean that is a Platform for my niche:
      http://www.threestepstowealth.com

      The thread on this group that explains it:
      http://preneurpal.com/forums/topic/own-the-game-and-win-it/#post-1747

    • #5063

      Malik Ahmad
      Participant

      Everything was clearly explained. Your YouTube video explained mail chimp well.

      Another way that you can get easy content is to set up Google alerts. That’s fresh content delivery to your inbox.

      Your 5th email did not have a clickable link or web address to join your CASH system.

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    • #5075

      Jan Sandhouse Hurst
      Participant

      Malik, thank you for being such a good troubleshooter. I thought I had checked that twice! I’m off to find the problem.

      I see what you were referencing. I actually didn’t include the link because the next email you will receive has a link to it as “your next step.” But I will add the link because if you thought there should be one, others probably will think so too. Thank you for making time to help me with this feedback!

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    • #5331

      Jan Sandhouse Hurst
      Participant

      Malik, thanks for the reminder! I just finished setting up the CASH In member site, so I’ll go back and add the link.

  • #5025

    Scott Hogue
    Participant

    I am in!

    Film at 11.

    Scott Hogue CChH
    Follow me in the "Use What You Learn Challenge" as I create a website using what I learn from Sean that is a Platform for my niche:
    http://www.threestepstowealth.com

    The thread on this group that explains it:
    http://preneurpal.com/forums/topic/own-the-game-and-win-it/#post-1747

    • #5051

      Jan Sandhouse Hurst
      Participant

      Scott, I’ll be watching for that YouTube link! Thanks for joining in, and I’ll be watching for your feedback.

  • #5035

    Bruce Hoag
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  • #5064

    Norma Allen
    Participant

    I just signed up. Looking forward to reading your emails!

    Norma Esler


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    • #5076

      Jan Sandhouse Hurst
      Participant

      Norma, thank you for helping me. I’m looking forward to your comments!

  • #5078

    Jan Sandhouse Hurst
    Participant

    For anyone who is helping with this challenge: If you are interested in the C.A.S.H. In With Newsletters course, don’t buy through the link. Send me a private message and I’ll send you the link as my “thank you ” for helping me!

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  • #5136

    Julie Ruiz
    Participant

    Hi there,

    I just signed up.

  • #5336

    Steve Allen
    Participant

    I just signed up Jan. I’ll be watching, waiting and letting you know as the 5 days unfold anything I think could be improved.
    First off… seems like another sentence or two on your Thank You page after opting in might be helpful. Instead of just saying ‘Thanks’ maybe you could say to watch your inbox or give other instruction as to what they’ll get and when.
    I’ll comment more as time goes on.
    Thanks.
    Steve

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  • #5432

    Don Sturgill
    Participant

    I'll help

    I registered.

    Did you want feedback on the landing page copy?

  • #5441

    Sean Mize
    Keymaster

    Don

    which landing page copy?

    Sean

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